Can you please read this?

........thats...............amazing.....… even though im 12 and i have read horror books for adults like misery by stephen king and odd thomas by bentely little adn i am in advance literacy and i am currently working on severeal books of my own I have to say this is very amazing i can picture the scenary (i Like to be able to see what the person is doing and scenary) I can picture Jock shaking the cat and the wound from the scratch. very good i don't think i would change a thing to be honest.