Rate my verse from 1-10. its rough but...?

not really a fan of hip hop, but this is pretty good. I suggest though that instead of saying don't ask for help it could be look out for yourself, but ask for help when yer down or whatever. A lot of people don't ask for help when they need it. look out for yourself yes, look out for others too, and help when you see it is needed. Good luck on your writing